Persuasive Text

Statement:Kids should not get more responsibilities because they will forget and then get yelled at by their parents. 

 Explanation:Kids have a lot of jobs and not enough play. If they have more responsibility than that can be bad for Young Minds because playtime is time to be creative. 

 Example:Adults/parents will always boss the kids around even when the kids have done the task because even when we fix the mistakes the adults always find another.

my criss cross

For last weeks learning we done activities about the sea I am proud of this work because it is the first criss-cross puzzle I've ever made the website puzzle maker and it gives you a selection of puzzles you can make, anyway I worked very hard on this piece of work i hope you like it.

Matariki fact file

For our reading work we had to do a fact file about different clotures and what they celebrate I am very proud of this work me and my buddy Heremaia worked very hard on it, this took us a very long time to make this fact file about matariki and the seven stars/sisters I chose this piece of work because it is one of my best and tells the reader a lot of things they probably didn't know

should the day of school be longer

 children should have a longer school day
do you agree or disagree?

write in the comments your thoughts

"I disagree the bus takes time to 
walk to your house your mum 

or dad comes back from 
work by the time your at your bus stop 

and not much people go on no bus"