19.6.20
WALT: use our 5 senses to describe our writing
Wow!!! all the animal’s are slowly walking towards sun city, as the jaguar sneaks and the voltures sour around the sky. The travelers travel across the desert feeling soft on their feet. They could see the giant hole in the middle of sun city. It was so beautiful. They both thought that it was mirage but the beauty was real the jaguar pounced on their camel their camel died luckily they survived but when the voltures came they ran, they hid in the building...
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